Feedback & Critique: (from submission video)

 

I am going to Introduce the glowing ‘ball’(s) at the start of my film so the end and the start will link back to all of the movie. I will do this by making the ball not so ‘random’ so that it ties into the models concept and film. I like the way the model is reflecting figure ground at sections of the film. I think i will take ollies feedback and refilm sections so that there is a link between the start-middle-end of film. This will create even more of a 'world' inhabitated model.  I still really like the hand texture of the model and the glowing, black and white effects, so am not going to change this. I played around with adding 'still' shots of my movie into my film. Although, I decided I didnt like the way it flowed into/with the movie so left the shots out and will post the shots with the end movie.

Feedback from Ollie